So in class we received feedback on our first draft as seen below: Feedback we received The Comic’s drawing style is good and applying computer touch up is not necessary – So one feedback item we received was that the way in which our comic is drawn using stick figures and hand drawn images isContinue reading “Feedback: Summary and Implications”
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Sustainability Comic: Our First Draft
We decided to focus on reducing food waste at WPI. The intended audience for our comic will be freshman or anyone who eats at the Morgan dining hall. The outline of our comic features a student with a plate full of unwanted food who is stopped by a WPI Green Team member who explains theContinue reading “Sustainability Comic: Our First Draft”
Class Feedback: upcoming revision ideas
In class earlier today, we had the opportunity to share our drafts with the class and receive feedback. Again, we showed the following image: Feedback we received What people liked: Idea of showing the “zoomed in” virus locations The “How to Prevent” box Combination of elements we have Cartoon-y feel What we could improve on:Continue reading “Class Feedback: upcoming revision ideas”
Second Draft
While working on our second draft, we were provided with much more information. Our client, Professor Korkin, came to our class for a quick project presentation and question and answer session. He also provided us with plenty of information on his method and research via email. So here is what we are supposed to do,Continue reading “Second Draft”